Yes, you have a very good essay. I've learned a few things about cancer from your essay. It's VERY Informative. I'm sorry to tell you this, but to tell you the truth, you made a mistake in paragraph 3. You typed, "but even tough....., "when its supposed to be "though". Very Good otherwise. To tell you the truth, I thought that us women were more in risk of the cancer since we have the . I never thought of it as our genetics.
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