Read this short story and tell me what you think, only looking for honest answers regardless of good or bad?

I'd give it a B-. Its very well written, though the plot is a little, well, it hasn't got any substance. Also, some grammer errors, like "miss-print" (Should be misprint), "Headline “drunken model trips over a $3,000 dress”." Should read "the headlines included "drunken model trips over $3,000 dress". Other than those errors, it definatly has potential.